In many countries small shops and town centres are going out of business, because people tend to drive to the large out-of-town stores. This results in an increase in car use, and it also means that people without cars have limited access to out-of-town stores. Do you think advantages of such development outweigh its disadvantages?
Nowadays, the shopping centres inside the cities in many nations are less crowded and on the verge of huge loss in their business, as the masses prefer shopping in the stores which are concentrated more on peripheries. Therefore, people who lack private vehicles may struggle to access the benefit of such out-of-town shopping facilities. This essay will delve into various positive and negative aspects as well as outputs of such recent paradigm shift and try to reach a conclusion after analysing manifold factors.
The major advantage of this scenario is likely to be the relief of traffic congestion inside the urban areas during the peak hours. Therefore, this resultantly leads to a significant reduction of noise and air pollution. Perhaps one of the other brighter sides of this is that the customers would not face any difficulty in finding car-parking space on such places, as these centres enshrines better infrastructure not only due to availability of ample space but the provision to attract more customers. For instance, these enterprises are likely to be equipped with various sorts of entertainment amenities, so that it serves as a perfect outing for families and bachelors.
One the other hand, the drawbacks related to this changes are noteworthy, which includes the deprivation of business in indigenous shops and additional expense for travelling. To elaborate, firstly, shortage of customers would adversely reflected in the net profit, which in turn worsen the situation with colossal amount of rent and maintenance expense. However, the extra travel expenditure could not be able to afford by the economically mediocre families, so that it may disrupt the balance of family budget.
In short, reduction in traffic congestion and environment pollution are likely the merits of this trend, while the demerit includes both the sellers are customers suffers additional financial burden. Therefore, I believe, the advantages are more significant because the drawbacks can be able to solve up to an extent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in short, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.346875 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90680606239 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.6495356362 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.583333333 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13930868137 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456666122364 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618638761605 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735006334316 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620024090049 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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