Generally, in this modern world crime rate is increasing day by day. However, there are number of criminals commit other crimes after they are releasing from prison. This eassy will discuss some cases and effects of this statement.
To commence with, there are myriad of causes of releasing criminals form prison because after releasing to prison they commit other crimes. To elaborate it, mostly hoodems are releasing to police station after that they commit crime because there think has strucking on criminal activities and after releasing from jail they are attacking on their opposite party people and loyer. For instance, every year almost 27% criminals in Brazil commit to crime after releasing from prison.As a result, criminals are making a dig crime incidents and create panic in individuals.
However there are immense of drawback for societies such as, mostly criminals are making panic situation in societies. In other words, criminals are creating panic situation in individuals life and societies and mostly offenders are attacking on normal individuals .So it is increasing crime rate for n societies. For example, in South Africa 50% students are studying in their homes due to high crime rate.As a result, mostly offenders are leading to societies with bad or rough way
To conclude, criminals are committing crime on their opposite person and it is increasing panic in societies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31390134529 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59433221335 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515695067265 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.1943535975 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.666666667 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7777777778 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275784887221 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135082521207 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779933940775 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169872873621 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837614316964 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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