In modern world, crime rate is increasing incessantly though, culprits do get punishment and are sent to jail. But even after attaining freedom they continue to commit crime. Although, there are a slew of factors responsible for such behaviour however, I will discuss few of them in this essay along with the couple of ways to resolve this deplorable issue.
To embark upon, association of immoral people. In prison various types of people are present, some of them are innocent and some are forged. However, when an individual is accompanied by people who are indulged in illegal activities, he tends to get brain washed and eventually fall into this trap. I can reminisce, one of my colleagues was imprisoned for two months since he was the prime suspect of a robbery. By the time, he returned from jail, he had learned new techniques of breaking a locker and started acquainting with other thief.
Additionally, nonacceptance of the society plays a major role in making someone a "Criminal". It is no exaggeration to state that we are equally responsible for such a lamentable situation because when a person goes to any place for job, he only gets rejection. It is perhaps due to the stigma of crime, we do not forgive them and indeed feel threatened to give them a chance to improve. For example, there was a sixteen year old boy who went to jail for stealing. Though, he changed later but nonetheless, he could not get a decent job to survive and was compelled to steal again.
To recapitulate, I would like to mention assertively that we all must come forward to bring this revolutionary change in the society. This can only be achieved by trusting this elite by providing them an opportunity to prove themselves so that they do not get depraved. Also, government must take robust actions to support them in beginning their new life by setting such facilities where they can show their skills and work diligently to earn money to sustain.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'slews'?
Suggestion: slews
... to commit crime. Although, there are a slew of factors responsible for such behavio...
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Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ty plays a major role in making someone a 'Criminal'. It is no exaggera...
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Line 7, column 398, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y setting such facilities where they can show their skills and work diligently to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nonetheless, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84821428571 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91097446252 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622023809524 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4713107839 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.8125 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113526731615 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036766496571 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365022926972 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0723451530483 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354105099387 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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