The passage states that the dinosaurs were Endotherms by discussing three hypotheses. However, the speaker refutes the passage and gives justification to prove his point.
First, the author tells that the dinosaurs used to live in Polar region where only Endotherms could live. This indicates that they were Endotherms but this point is contraindicated by the lecturer. He mentions that Polar region used to be warmer than now at the time when dinosaurs used to live in there and during cold season it is possible fot them to just migrate or hibernate like modern reptiles do.
Second, the reading suggest that the side positioning of their legs indicate that they were fast runners like Endotherms but the speaker rebuts this point and explains that the dinosaurs were not the high energy Endotherms built for running. In fact, this kind of positioning of legs was to support more weight which allowed them to grow to large size and their huge size was quite beneficial for them.
Third, the author narrates that the presence of Haversian canal is a typical sign of dinosaurs being Endotherms. On the other hand, the speaker challenges this argument and says that along with the “Haversian canal”, dinosaurs also had growth rings in their bones which are basically present due to the bone thickening. The growth ring is seen in animals who do not grow consistently that is there is a period of slow or no growth in them along with a period of rapid growth but Endotherms do not have this growth rings as they grow consistently even when there is cold. Thus, it proves that dinosaurs were not endotherms.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 308, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...when dinosaurs used to live in there and during cold season it is possible fot th...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es that dinosaurs were not endotherms.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'third', 'thus', 'as to', 'in fact', 'kind of', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.23745819398 0.261695866417 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.1872909699 0.158904122519 118% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0702341137124 0.0723426182421 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0535117056856 0.0435111971325 123% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0468227424749 0.0277247811725 169% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123745819398 0.128828473217 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0267558528428 0.0370669169778 72% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.62932839092 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0301003344482 0.0208969081088 144% => OK
Particles: 0.00334448160535 0.00154638098197 216% => OK
Determiners: 0.103678929766 0.128158765124 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00334448160535 0.0158828679856 21% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0200668896321 0.0114777025283 175% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1626.0 1645.83664459 99% => OK
No of words: 274.0 271.125827815 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.93430656934 6.08160592843 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.04852973271 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.299270072993 0.374372842146 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.215328467153 0.287516216867 75% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.156934306569 0.187439937562 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.120437956204 0.113142543107 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62932839092 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 145.348785872 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536496350365 0.539623497131 99% => OK
Word variations: 53.3554586622 53.8517498576 99% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0529801325 84% => OK
Sentence length: 24.9090909091 21.7502111507 115% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.5445368835 49.3711431718 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.818181818 132.220823453 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 21.7502111507 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.18181818182 0.878197800319 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.39072847682 59% => OK
Readability: 46.4419376244 50.5018328374 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.3488372093 1.90840788429 71% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.620798393379 0.549887131256 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.117182448043 0.142949733639 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0435425021483 0.0787303798458 55% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.609838655864 0.631733273073 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.149948368457 0.139662658121 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.28194266024 0.266732575781 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827356892388 0.103435571967 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.334141740936 0.414875509568 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.027524287092 0.0530846634433 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.416055432849 0.40443939384 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817362713715 0.0528353158467 155% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.26048565121 141% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.49668874172 57% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.62251655629 28% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 6.0 3.1766004415 189% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.2958057395 87% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.