In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measure could be taken to prevent this?
Due to the industrial development, the world’s environment is polluted in current centuries which leads many challenges to the society and ecosystem. Being noticed that specialists and scientists are finding solutions of each pollution related problems and governments and authorities are enforcing the new rules and regulations to limit the pollution. In this essay, two of the preventive laws, carbon emissions and waste water disposal,are explained.
Early this year, International Maritime Organisation (IMO) announced a rule, Carbon Cap, to reduce carbon emissions. According to the rule, it is not allowed to use the marine engines which generate carbon dioxide more than the specified limit. Despite of creating difficulties to ship owners and operators, it is a significant improvement to reduce air pollution since 65% of air pollution is from the shipping industry and it has always been a main ingredient of global warming problem.
Secondly, some of the government in developing countries such as Vietnam and Thailand, introduced a scheme to limit the toxic grade of waste water disposal. In this scheme, industrial waste water will need to be treated to reduce certain level of toxic before discharging into the environment. This is an important movement from the governments because the quality of water and marine species are threatened by industrial waste water disposal for decades. This will slow down the process of pollution and in long term, governments can even enforce zero disposal rules to protect the environment.
To conclude, sustainable earth is not necessary for the world itself but the survival of humans depends on how they can maintain a sustainable environment. For our next generations, we will need to eliminate the causes that destroy the sustainable ecosystem.
- An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation? 56
- Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that this is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own.Discuss both these views and give you 67
- In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measure could be taken to prevent this? 78
- Talk about the pros/cons of this era as is full of daily inventions 72
- In underdeveloped countries, tourism has disadvantages and can be said the opposite as well. What is your opinion? 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 443, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , are
...arbon emissions and waste water disposal,are explained. Early this year, Internat...
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Line 5, column 11, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...of global warming problem. Secondly, some of the government in developing countries such...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47857142857 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05694258356 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589285714286 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3552198994 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.833333333 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187145553461 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635103787989 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055170918543 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972816240984 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624630148598 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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