In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this?
Industries and over construction in underdeveloped countries have left detrimental effects on air and water. In my opinion, the state should impose a limitation on the location of industries and the amount of emissions from the production factories which will help in enhancing the quality of air and water.
The government should put rules and regulations on the operational area in order to protect environment from all the hazards arising especially from manufacturing industries. This restriction is extremely important as densely populated areas get directly affected by the toxic emissions and wastes of industries. Resultantly, a lot of life-threatening diseases might arise from it. In current situation, people living close to such industries are deprived of clean water and air which not only deteriorate the quality of life but its adverse effects rollover to generations.
Another significant way to mitigate enivironment pollution is to implement a law to make wastes coming from industries and construction sites to be completely recyclable. Companies will then invest in adopting sustainable methods to produce wastes which are recyclable into by-products. In this way, there will be less threat of hazardous waste to surrounding areas, hence, improving pollution problems. Furthermore, businesses will be encouraged to produce greener products with less wastes and eventually, all the leading organizations will be compelled to follow environment-friendly procedures to reduce wastes.
To conclude, countries still in developing stage are highly prone to environmental issues so the intervention of the state to resolve such issues by implementing greener ways to waste control and proper procedure to select the area of such anti-environment industries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 481, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun wastes is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...uraged to produce greener products with less wastes and eventually, all the leading ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, so, still, then, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7680608365 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43585303724 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604562737643 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5112013661 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.909090909 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176099866834 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666516751639 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418954898728 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102095782211 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557533070618 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.3 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.