These days most of the children and adults are addicted to computer games, it leads to adverse effect on their mental ability and physical growth, many doctors are really worried about this vibes in young generation. In this essay we will discuss the problems with extreme usage of computer games and try to draw the feasible solutions.
The major disadvantage with electronic games is, The children or adults who are playing electronic games are unable to mingle with others, they are becoming introverts, and they are unable to express their opinions in the mob. Secondly, the rate of physical growth in electronic gadget users are less when relatively comparing with non computer users. Thirdly, the maturity levels, general awareness and communication skills are also high in the adults who are getting involved themselves in the physical activities instead of electronic games. Finally, most of the psychological surveys reveals that the students who are indulged in physical activities are stood top in their academics as well.
The above well described problems can be eradicated with small changes in adults daily regime, educational institutions involvement and the government innovative ideas. Firstly, Parents should encourage their children to bring in yoga, gym or any other physical activity in their routine, and also they should impose time limits on their kids computer usage. Secondly, educational institutions should inculcate the physical activities in their curriculum and they can provide a portion of reservation to the students who are participating in physical games. Finally, the government must promote the advantages of physical games and they should increase the state level competitions more to instil the competition spirit in adults. If people follow these ideas we reduce the electronic gadget usage levels in adults.
In conclusion, Electronic gadget usage arise plethora of problems and it leaves the next generation in passive manner, so the doctors, educationalists and philanthropists are worried about this act. We as a responsible citizens should try to reduce the usage of electronic games and needs to pass on the message to our fellow citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1860.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45454545455 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85132071881 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521994134897 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.4919452871 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.076923077 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2307692308 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20605308868 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732997218314 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449519267185 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137641839944 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622493268273 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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