Many doctors say that people in today’s world do not do enough physical exercise. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions are there to this problem?
In the contemporary world, a significant rise in lack of physical workout has been noticed by the
health experts. There are a plethora of reasons. Those are contributing to make this issue more
worst such as advancement in technology, Internet, stressful life style and no work-social life
balance. However, every problem has a solution and if adapted correctly. A number of issues can be
resolved at an appropriate time. In this essay, we will discuss the problems related in the
details and viable solutions will be provided.
To begin with, the number one problem associated with it is the technology. Due to which everyday
new gadgets are coming in the market. Furthermore, more and more people are buying smart phones
and laptops. Which keep them busy all the time either with friends indulging in chat conversations
or browsing on various applications such as Facebook, Instagram and Twitter. This trend has been
seen among all kinds of generation from children to elderely. Ultimately, which put a bad impact
on the health and distracting people from being indulging in the physical activities. Next to it,
a majority of people are living a stressful life. Which means they do not get time for themselves.
In addition, they are struggling to earn their livinghoods and maximum amount of their time has
been spent at work. Eventually, their health suffers. According to the recent survey by WHO,which
stated that the major cause of mortality in human being is immobility. That has been rising to 79%
within the last decade.
The very first and effective solution of this problem is the government should allocate more money
to the local communities to held competitions. This means the competition will be related to a
race, swimming, tennis and various other activities which involve the physical work. This subtly
keep the community involve in outdoor activities and bring them health benefits. Secondly, strict
law should be purposed by authorities towards the limit of working hours per day. Which will
definately give extra time to every individual to spend on doing workout. Finally, employers can
make a contribution to make their workforce healthy by providing a gym at work. This is the fact
that a healthy body and mind can work better which will enhance the productivity at work.
In the conclusion, there are various problems occuring because the lack of traditional yoga and
exercise. However, these issues can be resolved with the viable solution purposed above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2181.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35872235872 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78749933659 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547911547912 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4115525235 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7777777778 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0740740741 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85185185185 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 27.0 4.38176352705 616% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 46.0 5.01903807615 917% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158808898339 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398802800711 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354093933915 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0409835183221 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363494276066 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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