Numerous doctors opine that masses in this modern era do not do workouts sufficiently for a number of drivers. In this essay, I will examine the reasons behind it.
At the outset, a hectic schedule is a predominant reason for making community indolent. To elaborate, people whether students or working professionals need to work round the clock for not keeping behind with their work or study, they do not have time for relaxation, thereby, being exhausted after a completing vocational hours. Moreover, several individuals regard the unavailability of park in the vicinity of their area as another rationale. Due to urbanization, the land which was utilized for strolling has been demolished to make space for residential buildings. Numerous habitants resort to gym to stay in shape despite the extravagant price they fork out.
Besides the aforementioned reasons, technology, especially computers and televisions, also contribute to this trend. It is true that multiple residents waste hours and hours on computer, neglecting sports and physical exercise. For example, a growing number of children are computer-literate and even addicted to computer games as software companies know how children are easily swayed by the novelty of playing new games. Through their advertising, such companies aim specifically at children as their target audience to promote their products. As a result, children are not taking up sports. Instead, they find their excitement in imaginary virtual worlds of gaming rather than the real, physical world. Moreover, thanks to several appliances, people no longer need to spend time doing household chores. That means, they can keep their eyes glued to TV and, afterwards, become couch potatoes.
In conclusion, these days, humankind is not doing fitness workouts because of various reasons. However, I suppose it is time people kicked their bad habit and exercised more to not lead a sedentary lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, for example, i suppose, in conclusion, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43708609272 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96352991196 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668874172185 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.1920157501 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5882352941 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159927511972 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481528426419 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064696285373 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120643535094 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790013207141 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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