Many elderly people are no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
Sending geriatrics in the care homes than taking care them at homes by family is ever rising trend in today’s era. This essay tends to discuss both merits and demerits of this tendency.
On the positive side, availability of facilities as well as professionally trained staff in nursing homes are to be proved advantageous for elder people. Considering facilities at first, care homes are generally contain elevators for the sake of smooth mobility of elderly. Even, rooms, beds, washrooms everything is made considering grey people in mind. As for the faculty, staff, who are shouldered the responsibility of elders, are not only awarded with professional degrees but also equipped with practical trainings for better service to grey people. In contrast, at the homes, neither they have elevators for convenience of elder people nor the family members possess adequate skills for the better care of older people.
On the negative side, ill surroundings of care homes and not having near and dear ones around them are the basic disadvantages for grey haired people to live in nursing homes. Elders are more prone to develop the health ailments as mostly people living in these places are ill. Also, they are deprived from the affection of their own family members. Although they might be promised by family to visit them regularly but these visits, due to hectic schedule of families, can be infrequent. They consequently tend to develop several physical and mental disorders which likely to make the matter worst.
In conclusion, despite the benefits of facilities as well as professional care takers in care homes to look after geriatrics, drawbacks, unhealthy aura of nursing homes and absence of kith and kin around elders, are too dire to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'contained'.
Suggestion: contained
...ties at first, care homes are generally contain elevators for the sake of smooth mobili...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, look, so, well, as for, in conclusion, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17482517483 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7347485847 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58041958042 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8379762991 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.846153846 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282729296695 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899060908461 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629983726672 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165975544981 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242453622613 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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