A large number of senior citizens are no longer cared by their families while placed in nursing homes or care facilities. This essay will argue that the drawbacks of elderly stay at care facilities offset the benefits entailed by this state of affairs, as senior citizens living in elderly care facilities can affect physical and mental health.
One commonly cited advantage of placing senior citizens in care houses is that they can get proper care in an accident. This is because the elderly do not receive help in an accident when they are left alone at home that cause hurts their lives. For example, there are regular inspections by nursing staff in the care house that can help immediately in the event of an accident.
Despite this, there are a number of significant drawbacks to putting elderly people in a care facility. First of all, they may feel lost and miss family members. The elderly feel abandoned because they raise their families but spend less time seeing their families in old age. This can lead to psychological harm, such as depression, and accelerate the life process of the elderly.
Furthermore, senior citizens who live in the care facility also has health injured, as there were many elderly peoples living in the care facility, nursing staff do not have many times to take care of everyone that causing the elderly to get ill from neglect. In contrast, families are more familiar with the elderly and can find out whether they are unwell right away.
In conclusion, although there is an advantage to putting old people in the nursing home, it is clear that the nursing home can make significant harm to their mental and physical health by staying in the nursing home. On balance, I would argue that the elderly stay with their families is the most proper way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
A large number of senior citizens are no longer cared by ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8538961039 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39460543368 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50974025974 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2732134875 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397601770734 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143868142648 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941485648358 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233681614513 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659013354801 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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