Many employees may work at home with the modern technology. Some people claim that it can benefit only the workers, not the employers. Do you agree or disagree?
With the advancement of technology, it is very much possible to do office stuff from home. A group of individuals conceive a notion that this is beneficial to only staff and it does not render any advance to employers. If asked, I vote against such view point. My perception is elucidated in ensuing paragraphs.
Pondering the light on my opinion, the foremost argument is that work from home culture cut down organisations' operation cost. With the less number of employees attending the office physically , the required office space will also reduce. This is in turn will reduce the office rent of the companies. Besides this, power consumption and other maintenance cost of office will also come down.
Moreover, it will increase the overall productivity of employees and consequently it will have positive impact on overall performance of companies. Work from home saves a lot of commuting time for job workers, therefore they will experience less fatigue. This will increase their efficiency and in turn will benefit to the companies revenue.
On the contrary, employees are also getting ample benefits to a large extent. To begin with, it will render a perfect work-life balance. As staff don’t required to travel, it will save their a lot of time which they can utilize with their family members. To exemplify my point, in a city like Mumbai , on and average commuting duration is total two hours in a day to go and come back from office. They can devote this time with their dear and near ones with work from home policy. Besides this, they can also save some money because of curtain in daily travel expenses.
In the end to summarize and recapitulate, it is conspicuous from the aforesaid deliberation that, work from home culture offers a myriad of merits to employees as well as to employers. In my opinion, it is a win-win situation for both stake holders.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as to, as well as, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94006309148 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72574814159 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545741324921 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0048473191 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4210526316 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6842105263 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73684210526 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149123470806 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047851656039 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431618175355 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812907757714 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355987025745 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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