While many governments focus on finding ways to boost their economies, concerns arise among people who believe authorities should shift the attention to other relevant points. In the eyes of numerous citizens, questions like social justice, affordable housing, and an efficient healthcare system are as priority as economic growth. Although citizens might be right, it is only trough economic stability and financial growth that is possible to provide high quality services to the whole country.
Economic growth has always been the primary goal of governments. It is a truth that, after all, only developed and rich countries can not only play a shaping role in foreign policy but also be able to meet the demands of their own citizens. For those who live in countries marred by corruption, political instability, and lack of infrastructure, basic needs like education and medical treatments remain out of reach, let alone high living standards.
From the examples mentioned above emerges clearly the necessity of focusing efforts to strengthen the economical tissue of a nation. Governments that can rely on high revenues can in turn invest a considerable amount of financial resources in education, healthcare, social politics, and assistance programs. Regarded by the majority as essential earmark of a developed country, these services, however, are linked to expense which have to be covered.
For this reason, just as necessary as defining priorities is finding the necessary resources to carry them out. If a government did not make a point of developing the economy, citizens would face up to poverty, misery, illiteracy, corruption, and political instability. The consequences of this strategy would be detrimental. Not only foreign investors would avoid to venture into such a unstable economy, but also citizens would suffer from social inequality and lack of basic assistance.
To conclude it is worth mentioning that economic growth is the bedrock of a strong society where everybody has the potential to improve his life and nobody is left alone. Governments should thus concentrate their efforts to consolidate the economy in order to provide citizens high quality services, like an innovative educational system, reliable and cutting edge medical treatments, and affordable housing.
- With the development of social media more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised to access to the internet in order to meet and chat with their friends which can lead to potentially dangerous situations What solutions can you suggest to deal w 56
- There is increase of noise in our daily lives nowadays Why is this a problem What can be done to reduce it The noise pollution is increasing at an alarming rate around the globe I shall shed some light on the possible causes of increasing noise and wha 84
- More and more people are now considering wearing fashionable clothes very important Is it positive or negative 84
- Most countries allow 18 years old to start driving a car Some say it is good to allow it at this age while other think that the age to start driving should be at least 25 Discuss both sides and give your opinion 56
- The spread of multinational companies and the resulting increase of globalization produce positive effects to everyone Do you agree or disagree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 387, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, thus, while, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1954.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48876404494 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92801745235 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609550561798 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0701879986 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.266666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7333333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100790677887 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0317249206944 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0256485007128 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0541568962249 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261711240872 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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