Along cars and trains, airplanes are without doubt the finest achievement of human ingenuity. Planes have made it possible what once seemed to be unreachable: flying. The technological progress has been steadily going forward over the last decades, so that airplanes can fly more safely and faster than ever before. Despite these undeniable improvements, environmental concerns have risen due to the potential impact on air pollution. As a possible solution air travel restriction has been proposed, which however seems to be impracticable as it would have detrimental effects on the economy.
Aviation is a strategic field for the economy: according to statistics, millions of passengers use airplanes for travel or business; airports have become more than just busy areas, they are now crucial sectors for exports, imports, and tourism. Even if it is essential to weigh the negative impacts on the environment, such as air pollution, traffic, and noise, it is also true that a country that does not invest on infrastructure and aviation is destined to an economic collapse. Furthermore, several studies have shown that airplanes are not to blame for high air pollution levels. Conversely, car emissions and waste from factories and power plants are indeed more harmful than exhaust gases produced by airplanes.
It would be therefore more logical to tackle the problem by reducing car usage, subsidizing public transportation, and supporting renewable energies. In the globalized world, planes are instrumental in narrowing distances, building bridges among nations, increasing economic wealth, and bringing quick aid to the needy living in underdeveloped countries. In conclusion, although it is vital to take care of the environment, I would not recommend to restrict air travel because this step could have a devastating impact on the economy of the whole planet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 424, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s vital to take care of the environment, I would not recommend to restrict air tr...
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Line 5, column 438, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend restricting'.
Suggestion: recommend restricting
...e care of the environment, I would not recommend to restrict air travel because this step could have...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46551724138 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04414800867 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655172413793 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5339975052 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.083333333 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117101627584 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410842611563 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370374254666 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0774313509544 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159097948723 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.49 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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