Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people , however think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people hold the view that economic success is a key indicator to measure progress of nations around world. However, some argue that there are other factors besides just economic growth that governments should focus in their efforts to bring improvements. In my opinion, other indicators like environmental sustainability, interracial harmony and gender equality play more significant role for nations to progress.
On one side of argument, there are people who believe that raising national gross domestic product or per capita income is the most important target for the government. As reducing poverty and increasing incomes would enable people to live a better life and improve their standard of living. Furthermore, less unemployment would also mean less crime and corruption in the country. These arguments justify that key focus of governments should be generating jobs and increasing the manufacturing and trading outputs that bolster economic growth.
Despite of the above mentioned argument, in my view there are other factors that could depict success for a nation. For instance, it is imperative for a country to have appropriate waste management practices, clean energy sources and invest in preservation of wildlife, flora and fauna of their region. Depleting natural resources and pollution could have detrimental effects of health of citizens and future generations. In addition, being wealth would not guarantee peace and harmony among the countrymen who may come from different races and backgrounds. Governments should ensure that there is religious tolerance and cooperation within the different ethnic groups residing in a country. Lastly, gender equality & inclusiveness of the physically challenged could also be an indicator of success since they also form an equally important part of the population that an administration must serve.
In conclusion, while economic progress is an important factor, it could only depict the short term success of a government and their policies. In long term, administration can only be successful if it can preserve the nature maintain peace and inclusiveness in polices for every citizen residing in the country.
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... every citizen residing in the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, if, lastly, may, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56927710843 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98292386287 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584337349398 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2753291568 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.266666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1333333333 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248276836061 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774245829492 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544998362712 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152793847858 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515936941013 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.