Many high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 per cent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women.
To what extent do you agree?
Senior positions are held by men inspite of females being a major portion of the workforce. I agree that the trend have to change and equal opportunities should be provided to women.
Unlike before women were working as an office administrator limited to sorting and arranging paperwork in the offices, then later getting married or having a child they prefer to stay at home. Nowadays, they are career oriented and have attained knowledge, skills and necessary trainings to climb up the corporate ladder. With managing household chores and office, they understand the priorities of life as well. Thus, she has supreme time management skills to toggle between various phases of life. Moreover, equally competent and talented which is no less than a man, women can hold and do justice to the C-suite or higher positions of the industry. Therefore, there is no reason that women are deprived of senior positions.
Gender diversity is another factor to promote women in the upper management of firm which harmonize the tensed boardroom meetings as an example. In addition, a female can bring innovative ideas and solutions fuelling the growth of the company. Lastly, women are more compassionate and sensitive towards others. Hence, they can easily relate to other’s situation.
Therefore, I conclude as long as job requirements qualify the credentials and one can overcome trials and difficult situations of the company, it would not make any difference if a woman leads the company.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, lastly, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24166666667 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79130594684 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679166666667 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.277579127 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7692307692 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4615384615 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101763650226 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349362050444 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406198375811 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0629453824959 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462674375154 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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