Many major cities today are becoming bigger and more crowded. Why is this happening? What measures can be taken to solve this problem?
Urbanization has become a trend during last years. This trend caused overpopulation in many megacities, and it is irrefutable this does have some negative aspects. This essay intends to analyze this situation and suggest some solutions to tackle this problem.
Living standards are growing every day, and it stimulates people to migrate from rural areas to cities due to aggregation of welfare amenities and job opportunities in big cities. For instance, a significant number of cities with high rate of population are equipped with rapid transport systems such as metro, green spaces such as parks, and recreational complexes. Have a career with good income is one of the most important aspects of life. It is reachable in megacities because almost all local and international companies have a variety of job opportunities in these kinds of cities. The question is what can really do to eliminate these issues?
Small towns’ people, as mentioned above, immigrate to growing cities in search of better job positions and welfare. Therefore, the best possible way is the equal contribution of amenity facilities for all cities. Governments, in the same way, could legislate tax exemptions as a persuasive program for companies that transfer their offices and branches to deprived areas and not grown cities. Under these circumstances, decrease in unprecedented growth of urban population could be anticipated.
In conclusion, although population of big cities increasing day by day due to gathering of job opportunities and comfort life facilities, but these problems certainly be addressed by proper measures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, therefore, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45418326693 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08869536326 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633466135458 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.032656544 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.307692308 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165230773888 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548441260734 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670869395653 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985143522655 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858899643435 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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