The rate of crime in increasing in various Nations and countries. There are various reasons why offenders continue crimes after their first punishment. This essay will discuss the reasons behind this and steps regarding how to tackle with this problem.
To begin with, the culprits continues to do harmful activities even after committing their first punishment. The main reason is behind that is shortage of well pade Jobs. The miscreants are facing disrespect by the society after their first punishment and people also does not prefer this type of criminals on the high wage jobs. As a Result, offenders again participate in criminal activities for survival. Moreover, sometimes the punishment is not strict so they do not take such domination strictly. They have not fair from punishment so they continues to commit crimes.
However, the menance of regulations can be fought. Education and awareness is the main Key confronting the challenges. The authorities should be responsible to organise the awareness camps for the culprits. In these camps the teacher should teach the moral value of life also how miscreants can become good citizens. Furthermore, the government must provide some financial helps to criminal which helps to step out of poverty. So they start their journey with the new positive step. Moreover, the authorities should also try to teach skills to offenders which helps them to get well paid jobs.
In conclusion, after serving the first punishment culprits tend to commit more crimes. This issue can be solved by assisting them financially and teaching them good behaviour and skills.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'continue'
Suggestion: continue
...y have not fair from punishment so they continues to commit crimes. However, the menan...
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Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s camps for the culprits. In these camps the teacher should teach the moral value...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28682170543 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69944475458 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565891472868 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.4932210791 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.7777777778 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300459176307 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814539456543 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821521061767 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198629314431 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0998008042833 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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