One of most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that the most of ex-convicting after releasing from prison. There are wide range of factors that why it happens. In this essay, i will discuss some reasons and give there solution in following paragraphs.
To commence with, there are deluges of reasons responsible for re-offending after criminal have be punished. The most preponderant one is that they are not accepted by society. To elaborate it, after having punishment when person return back to society they are seen as criminal eye by other people and they do not want to them enter in their society for which they treated with awful behavior. So they start hating other individuals and re-offending. It can only contribute to make them to commit crime again, but also leads to numerous other disadvantage in various fields such as raise negativity in society. Besides, there are another factor is that unemployment. This is because, as any person apply for job, that person have to summit document that he or she has never comit any type of crime, this case they have not opportunity to have better job. so person start re-offending crime to fulfill his or her basic needs. For instance, a study result published by the government of Australia in March 2015 and April 2017, clearly indicates that 30% of criminal commit crime after have be punishment those are unemployed. Needless to say, all these demerits have reaches impacts on society.
Step to deal with this problem are many. The most effective ones are not remote and complicated but practicable and accessible. The primary one lies that ex-convicts should receive counselling before re-entering society because they get ease and efficacy to adjust in outer world. Apart from it, they ought to training programmers in prison which help them it developing new skill those asset them in doing any work and earn money to complete they basic needs. These are some perpetrator methods to overcome from this issue and it can be only possible when all section of society contribute together.
To conclude, having pondered over above state it is crystal clear that re-offending by criminal after releasing from prison is due to bad behavior of society is dire to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, so, apart from, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98429319372 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64655413454 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557591623037 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5457185165 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.210526316 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1052631579 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168136530701 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511304186153 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487153435715 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907499538051 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351648638424 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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