Many Offenders commit more crime after serving the first punishments. Why is this happening and what measures can be taken to tackle this problems.
It is true that many criminals repeat crime even after their first jail sentence. This is due to indifferent attitude from society and family and it can be managed by social awareness among the public.
The primary reason for repeated offences from first-time imprisoners is that they receive a negative response from the community. This is to say, many people believe criminals are dangerous to society as they might engage in similar actions in future. Because of such intuition of doing felony, society ostracizes and keep them at a safe distance. By doing so, outlaws feel dejected and lose hope to restart a new life. This will lead and compel them to indulge in anti-social activities again. For instance, a recent study conducted by human rights commission shows that 30% of criminals commit crime after their first jail sentence since they are rejected by family or society.
The best possible way to confront this pressing issue is public awareness programme. In other words, society must be educated about different types of criminals and get rid of the feeling that all the convicted are habitual offenders. This is because, in many instances, crimes are committed by momentary impulse and they repel later in their life. So it is the primary responsibility of the community to take part them in social activities and provides all provisions to have a satisfactory life. Vocation training in Tihar jail in India is a perfect example of this where prisoners are taught how to embark and run small scale industries. This will help them to have a decent earning in later even if the family disown them.
To conclude, repetition of crime by jail leavers is the serious issue facing every society. However, it can be solved to great extent by accepting them as a human being and active participation in social life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 242, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...as they might engage in similar actions in future. Because of such intuition of doing fel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, for instance, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97719869707 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62491003287 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5667752443 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1402447606 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209811126991 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685011238019 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521070517101 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142012739339 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436819137451 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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