Many old cities around the world are going through a major process of modernization. What are the advantages and disadvantages of modernization?
The world is changing at a swift speed due to not the advent of technology per se, but because of the need of upgradation. The ancient towns are drastically converting into metros and in my opinion, a plethora of pros and cons, elucidated in ensuing paragraphs, are associated with this new norm.
Pondering the merits of such scenario, the foremost one is that better lifestyle for people. In other words, owing to technology, the residents will get modern facilities in terms of education, health and transport that collectively improves the living standards of citizen. In addition, safety is added feature of modernisation as old buildings usually have minimal safety measures, new constructions provide a sense of safety to the citizens. Other modern contrivance device such as computers, televisions, mobile phones and many more also luxuriate the life as users can not only get myriads of information but also communicate globally through just a snap of fingers.
Expounding the demerits of this tendency, the primary one is that traditional and cultural values are diminishing. As old buildings depict the heritage of a nation and customs, their demolition, sometimes, leads to loss of the memories associated with them. Furthermore, people are utmost busy with their life and fulfilling their gratifications through modern amenities that they become isolated and stressed. This is because majority of people living in modern downtowns are swamped with hectic scheduled and have paucity of time to spend with friends and family unlike people living in old town, away from modern life who are more contented.
In conclusion, there are quite a few advantages of modernisation such as better lifestyle, safety and convenience along with some disadvantages such as dwindling of cultural buildings and fast paced life. However, in my perception change is necessary and if precautionary measures are taken, people can get best of both worlds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35064935065 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98661064484 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584415584416 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.1273952636 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.333333333 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126816536583 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367437348382 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322900535204 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0627814350453 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292895895737 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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