Without any doubt, a family is the most crucial place for growing children. In the past, families have more children, even more, ten or eleven, being part of these families have advantages and disadvantages.
In the past years, having more children is a value for families, for instance, in countries, who had more son, be more wealthy, because their sons could help them in farmlands and these families could work more and get more results. Moreover, children never feel lonely, they could play with their brothers and sisters and also when they encounter difficulties, another member of the family could help them. They almost have a tight relationship and have better social communications skills.
On the other hand, being part of a large family has disadvantages. Every kid needs attention from their parents, but these families could not pay more attention to their children, they should divide their time for them. Some children might get depression or frustrated as they could not get enough affection. They also need some requirement for growing up, having lots of brothers and sisters cause that they stand in a waiting list to meet their requires. And in my point of view, one of the important things that large family kids face is less privacy, because when ten or eleven people live in a house, find peace, comfort zone becomes difficult.
In Conclusion, the family member is an essential subject in the modern world. In recently decads, families try to have less child to make a better situation especially mentally for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 200.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5984418408 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3344812231 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.4 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298017576779 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131592528861 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101572894322 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201578607134 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879906323154 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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