It is always argued that, whether the government should make decisions for the public's lifestyle or people should decide themselves? Although the government has an important role in investigating rules and design plans for a safe and comfortable life for people, everybody also should choose how to live in society. In this essay, the aforementioned will be discussed.
On the one hand, through historical evidence, the government always creates general rules for people's lives and shows them how to move through this way. They determine educational and healthcare programs with a view of people and society's needs. the government has a crucial role to provide a healthy environment and appropriate nutrition for people that have a direct effect on their lifestyle. Also in some cases such as sell and using drugs, the government has to make decisions because maybe numerous people want to use drugs and encourage others to use it and it is harmful to people's health and society.
On the other hand, the government should not expose people how to live and even how to think. In many countries, people even do not have the right to declare their expectations from life, because they will be suppressed. For example, in Islamic countries such as Iran, women must have a hijab and put on scarfs. Surveys were done in 2019 show that more than thirty percent of people especially youth immigrate from Iran to other countries to have basic human rights to choose for instance their cloths.
In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, the government should make decisions for people's lives in some cases. However, people are responsible for their life and should have the right to choose their lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'publics'' or 'public's'?
Suggestion: publics'; public's
...overnment should make decisions for the publics lifestyle or people should decide thems...
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Line 2, column 246, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...th a view of people and societys needs. the government has a crucial role to provid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04964539007 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65095530061 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528368794326 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4490267197 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.538461538 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38352342283 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149953532051 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123414928354 0.0667982634062 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276046408129 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0963682564252 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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