Without any doubt, a family is the most crucial place for growing children. In the past, families have more children, even more, ten or eleven, being part of these families have advantages and disadvantages.
In the past years, having more children is a value for families, for instance, in countries, who had more son, be more wealthy, because their sons could help them in farmlands and these families could work more and get more results. Moreover, children never feel lonely, they could play with their brothers and sisters and also when they encounter difficulties, another member of the family could help them. They almost have a tight relationship and have better social communications skills.
On the other hand, being part of a large family has disadvantages. Every kid needs attention from their parents, but these families could not pay more attention to their children, they should divide their time for them. Some children might get depression or frustrated as they could not get enough affection. They also need some requirement for growing up, having lots of brothers and sisters cause that they stand in a waiting list to meet their requires. And in my point of view, one of the important things that large family kids face is less privacy, because when ten or eleven people live in a house, find peace, comfort zone becomes difficult.
In Conclusion, the family member is an essential subject in the modern world. In recently decads, families try to have less child to make a better situation especially mentally for them.
- As a result of electronic inventions such as the computer and television, people do less physical activity, and this is having a negative effect on their health.To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- The government’s investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Government should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement? 73
- In the past, people usually stayed in one place throughout their life. These days, people often move around. They often live in several different places in their lifetime. What are the advantages and dis advantages of both?Give reasons for your answers an 61
- Some people think that it’s best to encourage children to leave family home as soon as possible. Others believe children should stay at their family home for as long as they like. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 56
- In many countries more and more young people are leaving schools unable to find jobs after graduation. What problem do you think youth unemployment will cause to the individual and the society? Give reasons and make some suggestions. 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00389105058 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55286725483 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571984435798 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0252524628 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.166666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283262136036 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114879973212 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100943152365 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198147949896 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896425348979 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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