Many people associate money with happiness and think that more money one has,the happier they should be.do you agree or disagree?

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Money has been linked to happiness by many pe...
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...ey has been linked to happiness by many people and they believe in the thought o...
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.... I completely disagree with this notion , as happiness is the mental state which ...
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...ntal state which is associated with many factors ,money being one of them and no...
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...e which is associated with many factors ,money being one of them and not the sou...
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... which is associated with many factors ,money being one of them and not the soul...
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... not the soul reason for everyone's happiness. Happiness is a sense of jo...
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.../her work is appreciated and recognised ,, similarly for teenagers it can be afte...
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...nd recognised ,, similarly for teenagers it can be after securing good grades. Th...
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... can be after securing good grades. Thus ,talent ,good grades and mental peace can...
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...after securing good grades. Thus ,talent ,good grades and mental peace can not be ...
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...es and mental peace can not be bought by money. To exemplify, lord Buddha was bo...
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...ght by money. To exemplify, lord Buddha was born with a silver spoon in his mout...
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...as born with a silver spoon in his mouth and was suppose to rule the kingdom ,how...
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...th a silver spoon in his mouth and was suppose to rule the kingdom ,however he found h...
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...uth and was suppose to rule the kingdom ,however he found his inner peace in serv...
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... peace in serving humanity. Moreover ,many billionaires and top celebrities ha...
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...is of bollywood actress Deepika Padukone ,who was diagnosed with depression few ...
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...Deepika Padukone ,who was diagnosed with depression few years back. Despite bein...
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... ,who was diagnosed with depression few years back. Despite being a highest paid...
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...pression few years back. Despite being a highest paid actress and having a succe...
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...sful career she was not happy. If money would have been the source of happiness ,we would have ...
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... would have been the source of happiness ,we would have not heard this real life...
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...iness ,we would have not heard this real life stories. Although there are many pe...
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...s view of money being the treasure house of happiness ,it does not hold true for ...
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...y being the treasure house of happiness ,it does not hold true for everyone. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, thus, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.944 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61426933043 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0861682638 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0769230769 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297558180811 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106826112837 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089292218993 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199592243166 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119208764548 0.056905535591 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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