Treatment of the criminals is a very disputable topic because they are a sundry section of people who are accused of some more or less serious charges. Some people think, it is not fair to put someone behind the bars as no one has the right to take away a human being's freedom. In fact, they suggest that such people should be made to work in the favour of the society. On the other hand, I firmly believe in jailing them as they impose a huge threat to our community.
Firstly, a criminal can not be trusted to be left open in public places, it is a a kind of compromise with the security issues of the common mass. All, criminals have a particular mind set as most of them have a repeated history of being indulged in crime plus some of them are serial killers known to have psychological illnesses. Thus, they are fatal for the whole community for example, I am able to recall one of a serial killer who was known to murder brutally 46 people and eventually got caught red handed. Therefore, I can claim that it is not at all safe to let criminals wonder in the open to do some social work because they can any time get out of control and it may lead to some major incident.
Secondly, every person should get the punishment of their sins strictly because people should realize that what they have done is in justifiable in the society and even the law will not tolerate such behaviour. In modern world, not everyone do turn into a crimimal to fulfill their needsin contrast to bygone. Indeed, most of the people, now a days, do it for satisfying greed or to take revenge. If people were left in open then they will never really feel the difference, I can think of my neighbor who had stolen a necklace from a house nearby. Though, he was arrested but some how he managed to get free. later, he became a professional thief because he thought that the consequences of such acts are not so lethiferous.
To recapitulate, I would like to stress on the point that every person is entitled to face the repercussions of their good or bad deeds. In addition, victims do expect to get justice and I am certain that all the sufferers in the entire world would opt to make these criminals as miserable as they were. Hence, I am of the opinion that this section of the society should be isolated as they have no right to live among decent group of human beings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 1, column 264, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
... one has the right to take away a human beings freedom. In fact, they suggest that suc...
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Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...to be left open in public places, it is a a kind of compromise with the security is...
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Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...to be left open in public places, it is a a kind of compromise with the security ...
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Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...to be left open in public places, it is a a kind of compromise with the security is...
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Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
... to bygone. Indeed, most of the people, now a days, do it for satisfying greed or to take ...
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Line 5, column 343, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...bygone. Indeed, most of the people, now a days, do it for satisfying greed or to take ...
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Line 5, column 577, Rule ID: SOME_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'somehow'?
Suggestion: somehow
...use nearby. Though, he was arrested but some how he managed to get free. later, he becam...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Later
...ed but some how he managed to get free. later, he became a professional thief because...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ive among decent group of human beings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, in contrast, in fact, kind of, in contrast to, more or less, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1925.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 438.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39497716895 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44847340133 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536529680365 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.7935132913 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.235294118 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7647058824 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4117647059 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227541058872 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693566622088 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486961317617 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138020915353 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259822252927 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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