Dear Sir,
I am writing to you to express my dissatisfaction with the work that you have done in my house a week back.
Allow me to elaborate the situation for you. As we spoke on phone, I can reminisce that I explicitly told you to paint the walls of my living room in light blue colour as it would complement very well the furniture and curtains there. Also, it was made clear that only oil paint must be used because it lasts long and it can cleaned easily.
However,to my unpleasant surprise, on my return to home, I observed that you have painted the walls of living room in green colour and that to using the normal paint. I am extremely disappointed with your performance and hence you will not receive any payment untill you fix this problem because the green colour is looking very shabby and I absolutely loath it.
So, I want you to repaint those walls with the exact colour, which we talked about using the oil paint. This should be done promptly as my parents are coming to stay with me next month and they are highly sensitive to the paint's smell.
I expect immediate action to be taken on your side to resolve this issue or else I will be compelled to file a complaint against you.
Yours sincerely,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'clean'
Suggestion: clean
...e used because it lasts long and it can cleaned easily. However,to my unpleasant sur...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , to
...ng and it can cleaned easily. However,to my unpleasant surprise, on my return to...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... very shabby and I absolutely loath it. So, I want you to repaint those walls wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48672566372 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38800353636 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601769911504 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.5526843398 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.4 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165899383498 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732611882465 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542186145061 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10385260453 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530257298617 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.