It is true that, in this contemporary era, pollution is being escalated at an unprecedented rate in all over the world. However, sizeable majority of people introspect that cars are being risen in metropolitan cities which is the huge source of pollution while, a number of individuals contemplate industries play an indispensable role in pollution. According to my perspective, both are harming our environment.
To commence with, there are numerous reasons. Although cars play an essential role in our day to day life and it is a symbol of status, it creates lots of air pollution in our environment. Moreover, motor vehicles produce diverse gases like carbon dioxide, carbon monoxide, nitrogen which are hollowing out our ozone layer. Furthermore, people are having to confront varities of obstacles like, asthma, heart-disease, and so on during their life. To exemplify, according to a survey, it can be manifested that more than 34% people in whole world die due to air pollution.
Looking at the other view, more pollution are produced by industries like, air pollution, noise pollution, water pollution. Firstly, factories are running day and night for completing customers demand but these are creating overabundance problems for people like factories dump their garbage in water that is why malaria, dengu and so on diseases are rising and plants and animals are being died. Additionally, machines produce loud noise which is harmful for human ears. Moreover, more industries are running on non renewable sources which produce more air pollution rather than cars.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly, cars and industries play paramount role in every country's economy as well as in our life yet, we must understand that more people are being passed away by them. In addition, we should take some major steps for solving these problems.
- Some people think that in the modern world getting old is entirely bad Others however think that life of elderly in the modern world is much better than it was in the past Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
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- SOME THINK THAT CLIMATE CHANGE REFORMS WILL NEGATIVELY AFFECT BUSINESS OTHERS FEEL THEY ARE AN OPPORTUNITY FOR BUSINESSES DISCUSS BOTH SIDES AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION 67
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- Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time This can beneficial for teenagers and the community as well Do you agree or disagree 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, in addition, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27796610169 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90492850083 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586440677966 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6762448895 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.214285714 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161175368112 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526075782506 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056269457543 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100848372196 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528468725157 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.