Many people believe that the increasing number of cars in cities is the biggest source of pollution and waste. Others think that industries are the ones causing pollution. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The problem of Pollution has been increasing since last few decades.In this regard,Most of the groups believe that rise in Cars are the main cause of pollution because it degrades the whole environment . On the other hand ,Some people think that factories are the reason of pollution,as it affects both water bodies and humans.
The Car creates pollution as it emits harmful gases in atmosphere,which ultimately affects humanity. The Car releases toxic compounds into atmosphere such as nitrogen, carbon dioxide and carbon monoxide. These gases contribute to smog, which damages the lung tissues and aggravates respiratory disease.For instance, According to Study Published by Times New, Air pollution accounts for about 25 percent deaths in India.The study also found that half of the deaths can be attributed to pollution from vehicles.
On the Other hand, Pollution emitted from the industries is also one of the major factors contributing towards water pollution. Dumping of various industrial waste products into water sources, and improper contamination of industrial wastes, often result in polluting the water. Such water pollution disturbs the balance of the ecosystem inside, resulting in the death of various animal and plant species present in the water. Also, The emission of various greenhouse gases such as methane, CO2, among others from various industries, increases the overall temperature of earth surface, resulting in global warming. Global Warming has various health hazards on humans, such as increase of diseases such as Malaria, dengue, Lyme diseases and plague.
To Conclude, Cars and Industries both are the main factors in contributing to pollution. However, Cars pollutes the atmosphere by degrading the air quality which in turn harms the humans who are more prone to toxic air. Pollution from factories affects Mankind and animal life in the sea. In My opinion, Both factors are degrading the environment and humans should find the solution to reduce it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for instance, in fact, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45307443366 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77209410432 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569579288026 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4389205316 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.357142857 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215734148425 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801710535828 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565792345905 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13735680787 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623890414867 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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