Many people believe that social networking sites (such as facebook ) have a huge negative impact on society.To what extend do you agree or disagree ?
Indeed, network sites are the biggest source of an amusement and the utmost significant role is played by these social networking sites in the life of people.Usually, it can be clearly seen that, how these sites are being used by people in an excessive amount for doing a recreational activities.In this modern era, people are getting used to social networking sites in their daily life.I partially agree with the given statement and now I am going to shed light on both the view points in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, the networking sites have a huge positive impact due to its innovative features without any kinds of obstacles so with the help of this network convenience whats app can be easily used for talking and conveying some an important messages to each other in foreign countries. Moreover, the business strategies are easily expand by business person in all over the country for telling to an another people about the specifications ,merits and demerits of their work in the particular field.
Every coin has two sides so same like this ,networking sites have also some negative impacts like; personal information of any ordinary person can be shared by anyone illegally on sites without any kind of fear.In fact ,the fake accounts are made of an enormous or businessman person by robbers on the behalf of personal information and details as well as some of the mischievous people mislead and play with the sentiments of their own mutual friends.
In conclusion,I would like to say that everyone should understand the value of these social networking sites and they should be know about the characteristics of using social sites as well as the mentality should be changed by people for preventing a bad thoughts from their own mind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96271186441 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75790160417 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576271186441 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 20.2975951904 291% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.542614151 49.4020404114 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 292.8 106.682146367 274% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.0 20.7667163134 284% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.6 7.06120827912 249% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209767241045 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11004119373 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516258076978 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127150776723 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312445420001 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.4 13.0946893788 240% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.59 50.2224549098 23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 11.3001002004 233% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.38 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.1190380762 253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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