Nowadays everyone is available on social networking sites and it's becoming increasingly popular among all age group. While, some perceive this as a positive trend, others believe they have a negative impact on society. This essay shall provide evidence on why social networking is not entirely negative and absolutely necessary to keep up with current time.
Recently, people are too addicted to social media, that they fail to connect with the real world and are consumed by the virtual universe. They continuously strive to develop their online personality, and neglect their real life. According, to a recent survey, many people felt comfortable interacting with strangers online rather than meeting or socializing with friends. They base their success and beauty standards on the amount of validation they receive online. As a result, some find it very difficult to distinguish between what is real and what is not?
On the contrary, social media sites like Facebook, Twitter, Instagram, etc. helps you connect with like minded people. It provides a platform to not only share your thoughts and ideas, but also to give an opinion on hotly debated topics. For instance, a recent hurricane hit the south coast of India and due to social media the news spread like wild fire and within 24 hours timely aid began to pour in from all over the world, thus saving millions of lives. Moreover, this news also alerted the neighboring states and they were able to evacuate on time thus minimizing the loss. Hence, due to it's wide reach and easy availability many prefer using social media to spread awareness and awakening among society.
In conclusion, social networking is extremely vital to be aware of current situations. It is an open space that facilitates interaction and a medium through which people can hear and be heard!
Although, there are some down sides to excessive social networking, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21337579618 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66855607568 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636942675159 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0891044904 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.3125 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205343825952 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629077214719 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508090607854 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996081568542 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585130213733 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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