There is a debate through people. Some believe that the theoretical lessons are much more important than sports, while the others claim that sports play the crucial role in children's life. It is undeniable that sports activities are vital for a child, and it could be fantastic if a pupil has the opportunity to take apart in sports class. In my opinion, both sexes must have some sport in their school schedule.
Basically, nobody can deny the importance of health issue, healthy life is wealth, and thus it is necessary to have sports class for youngster health condition. For instance, football, volleyball and basketball are a good way to teach boys and girls some technique and maintain their health simultaneously.
Secondly, the school should help the student to be away from been tired, thus physical activity could be a good option to break the monotony. For instance, a school manager should schedule their education and sports class as a way that both classes look attractive for both sexes.
In contrast, the opponents of this view claim that the others subject including mathematics, chemistry and physics are more important, for they help the academic student’s knowledge. However, individuals can not deny the importance of academic subjects, but people should understand that sports activities help people to be relaxed, and if children have tranquillity, they can learn more efficiently.
Take all the points into consideration, both sport and academic subject are vital for school-children and they come hand-in-hand to make the children's life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for instance, in contrast, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27888446215 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88601353803 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553784860558 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8421992916 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.454545455 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205653227058 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775797981419 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475146553106 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11347548717 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429044134114 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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