Many people find it difficult to give a speech or presentation to the audience. Would it be good for children to learn this in school? How important is it to speak well in public? Do you agree or disagree that it should be taught in school?
Making speech or presentation is no easy for many peoples. Some children can learn this in school because it is important in future to talk maybe in job. I agree it is good for children to learn about how to make speech.
Firstly, speaking in public is very much important. If person can make good speech he can get to win the people. Second, he can move person and help them understand things. So better for child to understand this is important as so try to get it from the school.
I thinking it is best for child to get to making speech from school because not all parent is smart. Some have no power to teach their son or daughter to speak in public. Some parents also poor and have no money to send for some special class so school is the best place for child to get this speech or presentation so that can use in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 53, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...aking in public is very much important. If person can make good speech he can get ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...t as so try to get it from the school. I thinking it is best for child to get to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 676.0 1615.20841683 42% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 160.0 315.596192385 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.225 5.12529762239 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22538620244 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 176.041082164 48% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 200.7 506.74238477 40% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8252781755 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.6 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259511018397 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116831677714 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732009038518 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200114774355 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899860560565 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 13.0946893788 49% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 50.2224549098 161% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.9 12.4159519038 56% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.81 8.58950901804 68% => OK
difficult_words: 14.0 78.4519038076 18% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.