Whether renting or buying a house and the corresponding impacts sparked a heated debate recently. Although contested by many that the matter of buying a house is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly negative by a substantial number of individuals. This essay going to debate both sides of views and then determines my own perspective on buying a house which is more beneficial.
It is quite evident that buying a house includes enormous pros which the most significant is financial prospects. if you own a house you would not pay someone else's mortgages. As a matter of fact, If a person can switch rent to mortgages every payment gets him closer to owning his own place. Additionally, owning a house provides security which is extremely important especially for those families who have children. A good illustration for this could decrease the requirement of taking their children out of school or uproot them from their friends because of moving.
Otherwise, renting a house has some benefits which lead individuals to prefer remaining a renter than an owner. The most important point of being a renter possibly could be having no responsibility for maintenance and repair. If something goes wrong it is a relief to be able to call a landlord to have it fixed. Another possible positive point could be related to investment on something else instead of loan payments or upfront costs. That means you pay less for the privilege which means you have more money to invest or even establish your own business such as a software company or invest in the fashion industry.
To conclude, while there are compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of having your own house far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of financial investments, but also reduce mortgages implications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: If
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Message: “if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'mortgage'.
Suggestion: mortgage
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ponsibility for maintenance and repair. If something goes wrong it is a relief to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, while, such as, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07565789474 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88412941384 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608552631579 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.803030154 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.866666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136345022302 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045221675481 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472449721038 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831666872136 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349221303837 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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