Many people say that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects equally. Others, however, believe that students should spend more time on subjects they like, or are good at.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Students are the foundation of the future of our planet and this solely depends upon the education and culture they inherent. In the same context, some school of business advocate that adolescents should play equal attention to all the subjects so that they can become all-rounder while others opine this. They claims that pupils should focus more on their favourite subjects as they may get specialisation in the field. I feel that both the opinions should be scrutinised before passing any conviction.
Admittedly, children have to decide the field of study at very early age and at such adolescence age, they are not mature enough to decide and come to conclusion. According to group of surveys, it has been found that 60% of children took wrong decision while deciding the former. Focusing on all the subjects will give them freedom to switch the work field later on and they can find satisfaction in the job. Furthermore, during the critical situation such as medical emergency, they can provide the first aid. This is only happens when they had studied such subjects in schools.
However, it should not be denied that more number of subjects more will be the pressure in students. Resultantly, stress will increase on the teenagers and may get in depression. After that, focusing only on favourite subjects will allow them to spend more time on them and their knowledge in the field will get vast. This can be very beneficial for any nation. To substantiate it, Dr A.P.J. Abdul Kalam studied about technology in their whole life and Indian Space Organisation is the result of that.
Having dwelled on such thoughts, It is clear that focusing on single subjects is beneficial to individuals as well as society. This trend should be adopted more so that future of any nation can be secured.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 312, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'claim'
Suggestion: claim
...l-rounder while others opine this. They claims that pupils should focus more on their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, while, i feel, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93421052632 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60479793826 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552631578947 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.696901879 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.75 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246655224537 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788247566084 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615202121917 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148478089602 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063345421798 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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