Many people these days have computer, laptop,telephones at their home for work.do you think working from home more advantages or disadvantages?
Many individuals have electronic devices, for instance, laptops, computers, and telephones in their residence for working purposes. I think, even though there are some disadvantages, however, working from home is more beneficial due to its positive effect on the traffic system and family life.
Firstly, in an overpopulated country, it could be a blessing, if people have opportunities to do their jobs from home, because of extreme traffic, as a result, it takes a large amount of time to reach the office. Eventually, more people will create further problems in the traffic system. For example, if some employee chooses to do their work-related tasks with the help of laptops or computers at their apartment, there will be fewer cars resulting, lesser congestion. So this process has definitely a positive effect on traffic.
Secondly, doing official work from home would be great as an increasing number of families have both working parents who left no time or short amount of time for their children. Consequently, there are high chances family members, especially children, could feel neglected. Moreover, this will have a negative impact on the familial relationship. For a clear example, if one parent could do his/her job online, he/she will more likely to have enough time to spend with family members. In addition, relationship bonding will get stronger. From the personal relationship aspect, this method work from home has greater benefits.
In conclusion, myriad people have electronic communication devices in their home so that, they could do their work from home. I feel this process has a more positive impact than negative impact because it is helpful to the traffic system and it has a tremendous benefit on family life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23928571429 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83886789379 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564285714286 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7532835106 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.785714286 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2857142857 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384821600646 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129365529847 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108380839146 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262156761595 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383351011837 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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