Many people think that happiness lies upon the individuals, while others think it is affected by other factors. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Happiness is a state of mind and it helps an individual to progress in life. In order to stay happy, some people believe in theoretical fundamentals, while there are others who reckon that staying practical leads to happiness in life. Hence, I am in complete accordance with the notion of other factor for happiness and this essay will portray both perspectives in the subsequent paragraphs.
As far as theoretical fundamentals are concerned, some individuals seek for happiness based on their personal preferences. These people do not care about the factors such as money, environment or luck. Instead, they dwell on the notion to stay independent of these requirements. They believe in hard work and pure determination to achieve their happiness. To illustrate this, Steve Jobs had ideas to make his dreams alive and stay happy, although he did not care about the financial crisis and his personal life. His only motivation to stay happy was working on his dreams and priorities, without paying heed to any other factors.
However, some people tend to be content, provided they have some factors in their favor. One of the key factors include money, because it enables individuals to buy things, items or any other materials that can make them joyful. Another substantial element that has emerged over a few decades is time and technology. The technology has evolved over the time and this has led to few discoveries which has made people happy. For instance, consider the example of video calling through various social applications such as Facebook, WeChat, Whatsapp, etc. Not only has this enabled people to connect to their near and dear ones, but it has also helped individuals find their better halves, overall resulting in happiness.
All in all, I believe that happiness lies in other factors, since this is an era where everyone is completely dependent on various elements that can only be bought by money.
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- Many people think that happiness lies upon the individuals while others think it is affected by other factors Discuss both views and state your opinion 84
- Many people think that happiness lies upon the individuals while others think it is affected by other factors Discuss both views and state your opinion 78
- Many people think that happiness lies upon the individuals while others think it is affected by other factors Discuss both views and state your opinion 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, well, while, as to, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08463949843 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73524579518 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592476489028 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3146886078 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.375 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192571676271 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570246407825 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512434340009 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126429249792 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618196954891 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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