There has been a view concerning about one of the sources of happiness is from gain more income. I strongly believe the idea, and will, therefore, discuss the reasons with some related examples.
From a family perspective, Making money not only can bring a house but also can choose the best property location for the whole family members, such as walking distance to school for children, causing the purpose of safety fully satisfied. Another significant argument in favor is that parents are able to take their children to travel abroad frequently regardless of budget consideration, therefore, children will understand more about our world and have a chance to know people in another area, thus deepen and broaden their understanding and insights.
From a personal perspective, gaining more income makes individual life joyful. Firstly, one's could choose an ideal place to shop or purchasing the commodity that people liked without budget problems. Secondly, self-esteem and self-confidence that people possessed depend on the cash flow in their bank balance sometimes, earning enough mean capability enough, the positive circle is protecting people looking forward all the time, they rarely have an unsatisfied career. For example, my previous job was in a huge company but only offered me a low salary so I felt upset as long as low work efficiency. After I changed new job and made double income, my friend said I changed a lot from inside and outside because I can free to choose what I want as well as I knew I have the ability to done my work well to match the money that I earned.
In conclusion, money is essential in people's lives, it serves us in chasing a wide range of dreams that we love so that is the happiness source.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9387755102 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70860230512 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649659863946 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.7686655273 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.2 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197748415558 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677139130967 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370500001635 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116050830544 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210317249766 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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