Many people think that money brings happiness, but others think that having too much money is a problem. Discuss both views and give your own opinion....
Money is important to live qualify life but not everything in life. Therefore, people believe that money plays an important role to be happier but there is also an opinion also that filth wealth spoils the life. I certainly believe that money brings some happiness in one’s life and i shall explain why it is so.
People who believe that money spoils the life have some valid arguments. First and foremost, too much wealth generates unwanted hobbies and it is commonly seen that rich people do not find a place to spend the money and sometimes incline towards the unrealistic hobbies or goal which lead them to deterioration in life. Secondly, abundant money also turns people to become reckless and sometimes it cost their life also. For example, Brazil prime minister who belongs to rich family, helped rich people to get government contract and was later imprisoned for life. Finally, possessing wealth in some country gives the feeling that everything can be bought including the laws of country, resulting, people get trapped in laws and severe punishment.
Despite of dis-benefits of having too much money, people follow the money for following reasons. The main reason is that all necessities can only be fulfilled only by money. Moreover, quality life, medical facilities and good education makes people happy up-to some extent. In addition to this, few luxuries such as excursion, outing fashion etc.... add more satisfaction in life and in order to do these things, money is required.
To conclude, although happiness can be achieved in different manner, the most common way to achieve this is to live the life fullest and for that some money is required to go out, visit places, eat at restaurant etc. Nevertheless too much money may bring arrogance, recklessness and other bad hobbies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07382550336 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58643647113 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593959731544 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0166229559 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.8 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229954677753 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908013877203 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694614029008 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152134590768 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194565974907 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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