Many people think that money is important for achieving happiness. What importance does money have regarding happiness? Give your answer with relevant example?
Happiness is something which cannot be described in words, it mean a different thing to different people. It is thought by masses that financial means and money is vital in order to attain joyful life. Money is helpful in fulfilling many desires of an individuals and also used to achieve social status, which can be associated with happiness .
To begin with, many materialistic things in this world can be purchased with money. In other words, people are fulfilling their desires and have possession, which cannot even afford to buy. If a person have money he will definitely try to provide the best of facilities to his family members and loved ones. Fore example, rich people generally have luxurious homes, cars and useful amenities. Apart from this it also helps to achieve the felling of accomplishment, because all the luxury is the result of huge dedication and hard-work.
Moving further, undoubtedly money is also useful in maintaining social status. Since individuals who have surplus income get more involved in social activities in comparison to others, so they are able to socialize in effective manner. Community life is indispensable for all the human beings, as we all are part of the society, nobody can live alone. Many public events has been sponsored by wealthy people's like Indian Premium League is running because of the contribution done by many high net-worth individuals. Moreover, they also donate money for the charity and needy people's, all this social support raise their values in the eye of the general public. Because of which they gain more respect and value.
In conclusion, unequivocally money cannot everything, but many significant things can be achieved with financial resources.Therefore, rich people have more successful and happy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, apart from, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23344947735 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87107219616 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599303135889 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4679197774 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.133333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223776510621 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758997153295 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580072109811 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156918774585 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039744499091 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.