There are things which money can buy and there are things which cannot be bought with money and which are crucial things for a human being to survive in peace and calm nature and yes, of course, they are absolutely free. I completely agree with the statement because I believe that happiness and satisfaction are the things a person cannot buy with his owned wealth. this essay agrees with the statement and outlines the relative points.
To begin with, every individual thinks that money will afford anything on earth possibly, this happens and occurs only to a threshold. Money has its own limitations which humans cannot anticipate. A person who farms his land always looks cool, satisfied and happy, because, it is not his wealth making him happy it is his satisfaction with a job which he pursues. But, on the other hand, a wealthy person always struggles to move freely even with his close to heart people around in public area, where he feels insecure, such person has threats which are unforeseen. For instance, if a person dies money cannot fill his or her position and make the emotions calm. In the same way, money would bring attitude and fills a person with an ego which makes a person bad in society and culture.
Similarly, as mentioned above those things which are cannot be bought with money such as happiness and self-satisfaction, other things which are crucial are love, kindness, and sense of humor. Being friendly with others makes us a good person, again which is a thing which money cannot make despite it makes an individual rude and characterless. For example, the owner of the kfc world's famous fast-food chain owner had a very bad experience with his customers when he accidentally disturbed someone eating and didn't even apologize to them for doing so, they sued him for 14 thousand dollars due to his misbehavior.
To conclude, of course, money does matter when it comes to wealth and self-control and balance among individuals, but only money cannot make anything. The happiest person is the wealthier person no matter what place it is around the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 369, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...erson cannot buy with his owned wealth. this essay agrees with the statement and out...
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Line 5, column 501, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[7]
Message: The word 'someone' in subjunctive clause must be used with a base form of a verb: 'eat'.
Suggestion: eat
... when he accidentally disturbed someone eating and didnt even apologize to them for do...
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Line 5, column 512, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...cidentally disturbed someone eating and didnt even apologize to them for doing so, th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, similarly, so, for example, for instance, of course, such as, to begin with, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87675070028 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53043987407 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543417366947 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.2006850252 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.357142857 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142471043598 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558006385412 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578324070144 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993437727779 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757623808882 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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