Many people try to look younger than their age. What are the reasons people do this. Do you think this a good thing or a bad thing?
These days many people are doing plastic surgeries to look good and stay in shape. People are trying to look younger than their age. There are several reasons why they are doing this, some think it is a good thing and others a bad thing.
On one hand, many reasons let people to have plastic surgery or use cosmetic products, to look younger than their age. First, it could be a psychological matter, where some prefer to stay beautiful and won't accept themselves to get old, that's why they won't stop on having cosmetic surgeries, to stay young. Second, family issues would be another reason, women try her best to stay young and look charm in-front of her husband, so he won't cheat, look on other girls and stay loving her. For example, some TV channels broadcast such cases, where big number of women can't get enough of changing themselves to look young and stay beautiful.
On the other hand, several think that this a good and others a bad thing. From the view of good, people believe it's nice for someone to work on his looking and this will impact positively on themselves and their feelings, where they think that they are still young and won't look old and fatigue. Second, people think that this a bad habit, they must pass by all stages and live a normal life. However, some think it is good in some matters where they can take care of their beauty and bad if they exceed the limit and become their majority in life. For example, a friend won't accept herself that she's getting hold, she attends to do everything to stay young and look nice in-front of the people, this matter caused her psychological issues.
As a conclusion, people especially these days are trying to stay young and big number of people are accepting it and others are not. From my point of view, I believe that it is nice to look over ourselves and be beautiful, but no letting this thing become the primary in our lives, since I think it is a trending and it will pass with time.
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Suggestion: that's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, second, so, still, for example, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16569093402 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483240223464 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.7703425462 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.071428571 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412228532189 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180209012611 0.084324248473 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127328307463 0.0667982634062 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.324890965522 0.151304729494 215% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.212449383851 0.056905535591 373% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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