Many people try to look younger than their age. what are the causes people do this? Do you think is a good thing or bad thing?
At present, to be younger is very important aspect of many people. There are various ways people try to be younger such as staying fit, thought process similar to adolescents, etc. In my view, strongly believe this trend is good thing because it will help to live longer as well as prevent from various ageing diseases.
Nowadays, many people at the age between 40 to 50 give more emphasis to be healthy and fit, which would make sure them to be younger. If people look obese along with white hair, then it resembles your old age. For instance, my uncle who is 50 going to fitness centres regularly and dyes his hair to ensure to be younger. Additionally, some change their thought process similar to youngsters at work locations in order to be mingle with team and to make sure that they are not old. Moreover, some parents will play with their children, to make sure that they have better communication with their kids, to reduce the age gap.
At the moment, the trend to become younger is really vital for many parents. Most importantly, it will help them not to be lazy also prevent them from various old age diseases like diabetes and obesity. Furthermore, it has been believed that by being younger will create competitive spirit in work locations. Lastly, life will get frustrated when people think they are old, instead if they pretend to be younger then could engage in to various social initiatives.
In conclusion, to look younger than their age is an extremely intricate process and it will do wonders for various people. This trend will benefit old people to live longer and stay away from dangerous illnesses.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Line 5, column 405, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'younger than'?
Suggestion: younger than
... are old, instead if they pretend to be younger then could engage in to various social initi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, lastly, look, moreover, really, so, then, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77738515901 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43360561506 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565371024735 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6784602382 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.5714285714 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241889216241 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852592780339 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516017358706 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16082756755 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504817677245 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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