There has been a good competition shown by middle aged people to youngsters in terms of looks.Which of course is an amazing sign depicting people are becoming more cautious about their appearance and looks. Looking good at work and to develop a self confidence are some of the predominant factors elevating the surge to look good.But it is also vital to consider the correct and unharmful methods to look beautiful or handsome.
It is an absolute delight to look attractive and way less than your age,majorly people want to show case their appearance at work,this generate healthy competition amongst peer to look good and inherently disseminate the norm to stay healthy.Being ostentatious in looks also generates great deal of confidence which is crucial to make decisions.One of the profound reason for people to emphasize younger looks and being healthy is surge in expense of medical facilities, as a result they tend to spend more time doing an exercise so that they remain young , fit and it will help them in keeping at bay from unaffordable hospital expenditure.This is particularly applicable to middle class people.
There is no doubt that looking good is a magnificent feeling and often is an utmost human desire, however one must pay a diligent attention by what means we attained a wonderful appearance.For instance if looks have been acquired regular exercise or following a healthy diet regime and to some extent maintaining a work life balance then the results are ostentatious and long lasting.But if unnatural means like silicon implantation and excessive use of cosmetics are used then it can have a significantly adverse affect on body and skin.Over exposure of cosmetic diminishes the skin layer makes us more vulnerable to catch skin disease and is a prevalent reason for horrific disease like cancer , because skin get exposed to ultra violate rays which are exceptionally harmful.
In conclusion, its awesome to look good and young.Be it for work or to enhance the self esteem.But its equally imperative to choose the means by which we can look good.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, of course, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10557184751 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97189388597 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598240469208 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 20.2975951904 335% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 266.296075825 49.4020404114 539% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 348.2 106.682146367 326% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.2 20.7667163134 328% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.2 7.06120827912 286% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190097838772 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108824743615 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486929661356 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118138012813 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604713623453 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.7 13.0946893788 280% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.46 50.2224549098 5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 11.3001002004 264% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.54 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.32 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 29.2 10.1190380762 289% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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