Many people try to look younger than their age. Why do you people do this? What are the consequences of this?
Nowadays, several individuals do not want to look aged but younger always. Although there are several reasons responsible for this trend, it is not without its negative effects which include loss of life and cancer of the body.
To begin with, there are, of course, numerous reasons why people want to look young always irrespective of their age. The first reason is fashion trend. It has now become a fashionable thing among people that are old to want to look like a 25 years old individual. This is most prominent amongst the celebrities, it has now become a competition to look fresh and renewed everyday. Because of this they use cream, soap, or even reduce their food intake. As a result, they look younger than their age not minding the aftermath. Another important reason is relevancy. In other words, people want to be recon with in the society or whatever field they are operating, so they involve in activities that can make them look like a youth even when they are old. The activities may be in the form medical or physical. For example, many celebrities undergo plastic surgeries in order to still look under 30 years even at 60 years of age. Thirdly, attractiveness to opposite sex has been a motivating factor behind this. This is because men loved to be surrounded by young looking women and the older ones are jealous of this, so the way only out is for them to look like them. To illustrate this, fats women not only watch their weight and diet but also do gymnastics , so as to be attracted to their spouse and other men.
On the other hand, looking younger than one's age have many consequences. Firstly, it can cause negative reaction to the skin. Oftentimes, the skin lightening soap and cream causes irritations on the body;as a result, lead to cancer of the skin. Secondly, it can lead to death. Many people had lost their lives as a result of wanting to look young. For instance, a lady died in Lagos, Nigeria in 2017 when a facial plastic surgery was carried out on her due to negative reaction of the chemicals used.
In conclusion, although men and women are not left out in the urge to look younger than their age owing to the fact that they wanted to be relevant and going with fashion trend, there are repercussions of skin diseases and mortality that it can result to.
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- Some people think that money is the best gift to give to youngster while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...ls do not want to look aged but younger always. Although there are several reasons res...
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Line 3, column 372, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...a competition to look fresh and renewed everyday. Because of this they use cream, soap, ...
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Line 3, column 1258, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r weight and diet but also do gymnastics , so as to be attracted to their spouse a...
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Line 3, column 1261, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...eight and diet but also do gymnastics , so as to be attracted to their spouse and other ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, of course, as a result, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1901.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 410.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63658536585 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4944358846 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514634146341 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3914492551 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4090909091 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327710539056 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912643934258 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789578093854 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179448380893 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764130471228 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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