Many people want their country to host an international sporting event. Others believe that international sporting event bring more problems than benefits. Discuss both views and include your opinion, supported by examples.
Throughout the 21st century, plethora of significant global events have happened at different locations. Sports, which is played among nations, is one such event which is becoming extremely popular, especially among the youngsters of the developed nations. Many societies want to host global gaming tournaments as they feel that hosting will help them to increase their revenue while there are others who opine this and feel that plenty of bad aspects will be exploited by the international media, therefore, nation's image will be ruined. Both the opinions are strong, hence should be scrutinised before coming to any conclusion.
Admittedly, hosting multi-national sport tournaments will directly effect the tourism and service industry in positive means. Flow of money in this sector will increase as tourist will spend dollars to get accommodation etcetera. Furthermore, at international levels, currency exchanges will occur at a rapid rate which will help to strengthen the economy of the particular nation. Apart from this, such international games can help to bring peace to the world as their is a lot of tension among the various nations and this can be reduce by the sports. For instance, Russian Prime Minister and American President were seen together discussing about the football during the FIFA World Cup 2018 despite the fact that there is dispute between both the countries.
Since all the security forces pay special attention towards the stadiums and important sites, the rest of cities become vulnerable and a lot of crimes can occur. For instance, reports of theft incidents in Rio during Olympics increased by marginal percentage. Further more, some faux mind people see this as a opportunity for corruption, resulting in the loss of millions. Corruption of Rs2400 crore was reported during Common Wealth Games, 2014 is the prime example. Such incidents were shown by BCC news channel at international levels and the economy went down.
Having dwelled on such thoughts it is clear that pros of hosting sports events are more than cons. Just because of ill-mentality of some people, it will be unfair to give opportunity to other individuals and societies to bring peace to world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, apart from, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1859.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28125 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75799311459 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622159090909 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7028278245 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.1875 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181363707821 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525596022703 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516588300848 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11212194279 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491853589456 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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