International sporting events do a lot for cultural understanding and economical
development among the global family. However, the staging of major international
sporting spectacles is not entirely positive. Thus, the opinions surrounding whether
international sporting events contribute positively to a country or not will be analyzed
before a reasoned conclusion is drawn.
It is believed by many that countries who host major international sporting events
reap numerous rewards. Take the Beijing Olympics of 2008, for example. These
Olympic games greatly helped China to shed its twentieth century status as an
incapable, political mess. This positive change to the country’s image did a lot to
encourage international trade partners, who may have been weary of the country’s
capabilities otherwise. Thus, it is clear why many people around the world want their
country to host an international sporting event.
However, there are other groups who feel internationally held sporting events do
more harm than good to a country. For example, the Formula 1 race held annually in
various cities around the world is often criticized for its insensitive nature towards the
environment. As the racetracks are only used once a year, many feel this wastes the
huge stretches of land they sit on, land that would perhaps be better used for
residential purposes. Thus, it is understandable why many do not support their
country’s foray into international sporting.
After looking at both sides of the argument, it is felt that a country’s participation in
international sporting events is much more positive than negative. It is hoped
international sport can help promote cultural understanding.
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- Many people want their country to host an international sporting event. Others believe that international sporting events bring more problems than benefits. Discuss both views and include your opinion, supported by examples. 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, may, so, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69348659004 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29923547401 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613026819923 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0349597511 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.142857143 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423059438602 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157859365076 0.084324248473 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124816621757 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130520779617 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136351651014 0.056905535591 240% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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