Many people work long hours leaving very little time for leisure activities Does this situation has more advantages or more disadvantages
Even though the work hours are limited through regulations on employees benift considering the most of aspects, many people work for extra hours while sacrificing limited time for leisure activities. I strongly believe that, working long hours will generate more disadvantages to their lives.
All human being struggling from morning to night is to achieve single goal, which is satisfaction. As an employee, work life balance is more important to be a highly satisfied successful human being. Therefore, engaging family and friends is more important to balance the life rather burning all guel for the work. In addition, engaging in too much time creates stress on mind and impact on health system considerably. Diabetic and high blood pressure are more common diseases come with the long term stress. Further, leisure time is more important to have a good life, which creates friendly environment on mind and physical health which move forward for high satisfaction.
However, with the competition and the economic crises, job comes to the first place to win the rase. Therefor, people involved more time with work to earn more money through extra hours and have a good relation with the management to get other benefits. People never feel on satisfaction without the good financial background due to the current economic situations as every on on etruggling with day to day cost management. Therefore, there are some short term advantage on working long hours.
Considering all above, to have a long term benefits and good life, I believe that, long term working hours are not provide considerable advantages to the life. However, with the current context, carefully managed working hours is more vital.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the aspects') or simply say ''most aspects''.
Suggestion: most of the aspects; most aspects
...ons on employees benift considering the most of aspects, many people work for extra hours while...
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Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...es, job comes to the first place to win the rase. Therefor, people involved more time wi...
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Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Never' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
...h the management to get other benefits. Never, people think on satisfaction without t...
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Line 4, column 116, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
...e that, long term working hours are not provide considerable advantages to the life. Ho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, therefore, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27169811321 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66032650828 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554716981132 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4358536139 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7857142857 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350944757391 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120259574774 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782746029959 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227902822672 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065617008632 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.