In recent years, the constant competition in all kinds of occupations with the rapid economic development meanwhile employees spend a lot of time to learn new knowledge and work in order to catch up with different changes that will cause employees to reduce their leisure activities. I am definitely convinced that more disadvantages if employees have less leisure time.
On the one hand, there is no denying that opportunities are reserved for those who are prepared. In order not to be left behind by the pace of the times, some people spend more time in contact with the latest information to find opportunities that suit them. However, reducing rest time because of excessive working hours can affect not only physical health but also mental health.
On the other hand, it is necessary to constantly catch up and get in touch with new knowledge and technology that cause tension and anxiety under long-term pressure which lead to neurasthenia. In addition, lack of physical rest will weaken the body’s immunity make it easy for viruses to invade, also it is difficult to cure. Whether it is a mental or physical illness, will require a lot of time and money to treat.
In conclusion, equipping yourself to catch up with new technologies and knowledge is necessary, but it also requires attention to body health. Otherwise, even if there is an opportunity, this is lost because of physical discomfort. Therefore, the time for work and rest needs to be properly allocated, apart from that will not worth the loss.
- some people say that art subjects such as music drama and creative writing are essential part of education and every school should include them in its syllabus do you agree or disagree with this statement give your opinion and examples 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, while, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98823529412 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81321646007 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580392156863 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2431263018 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.636363636 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178690667717 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694922229781 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682406933092 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104861919703 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449637150308 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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