Many places of natural beauty, such as lakes, beaches and mountains are spoilt by garbage by the people who live there. Why do you think people do this? What can be done about the problem?
Today, most beautiful places like beaches, lakes and mountains have too much of waste in the area and this is spoiling natural place. The problem is happening because of people and some solution to stop is possible.
Firstly, if anybody go to beaches in India first thing they see is plastic cover, bottle can all garbage by people visiting there. People not serious to keep beach clean like in Canada. Even in lakes, they throw flower and all kind of garbage making Ganga river super dirty.
To stop people from making so much garbage in beautiful place, police should put fine for people and this way people get scacy and not throw everywhere. This can help stop the garbage problem in country like India
Finally, I think teacher teach about it in school and people get education for garbage problem can also help but it will take long time as people do not change fast.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, so, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 730.0 1615.20841683 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 155.0 315.596192385 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70967741935 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.0360333597 2.80592935109 73% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638709677419 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 506.74238477 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4132904045 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.285714286 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367681419656 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149628686096 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757434240508 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215228757888 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470281226911 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 78.4519038076 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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